Idrisfall R3 - Paper Faces P5

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Notes:

- I'M REREADING THIS PAGE IN R5 AND I JUST REALIZED I FORGOT A REALLY IMPORTANT WORD BUBBLE. WHEN STRATUS HOLDS UP HIS ARMS HE'S ANNOUNCING THE PURPOSE OF THE BALL AS TO GAIN SUPPORT FOR A NEW MILITARY INITIATIVE

I FORGOT THE BUBBLE

NO

(I'll fix it later when my desktop is up and running.)

- Ratje's canon mission is not assasinating Stratus! It's something else entirely, hehe, but I asked Verd for permission to mess around w/ it way back when at the beginning of the round, and she kindly said yes. c:

- I think the top scene comes across as too shippy. That's... not what I wanted, but still my fault. Oh well, hopefully it's vague enough. I'd take the two gazing panels out but art-wise I think they're among the better ones. xD

I'm not totes in love w/ this page as-is, but oh well, at least I'm happy to finally post it! You can tell the lineless style is starting to lose its luster for me, ahaha. So yeah, I'm not going to agonize anymore, I'm making Lemongrab noises over here. : p